28 February 2010

radial poster part deux




here's the first two versiona of my second radial poster. This system is extremely difficult for me. I Don't like it one bit.

Let me know what you think.
after putting up the preview, I took out a lot of those music notes out. Unnecessary.

2 comments:

Adam Mendala said...

I like the gray bird better, I think the blue one fights for attentions a bit too much. I love the type! very fun. My only suggestion would be to make the logos all gray or blue, rather than colors.

Mollie McGill said...

any idea on how?
i tried for an hour and it hurt my brain.